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[原创]七律.千年一叹

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发表于 2009-11-5 14:10:19 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
<p align="center"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: Roman?; ?Times mso-bidi-font-family: mso-hansi-font-family: New? new="New"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">七律</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体">.</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">千年一叹</span></span></font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: Roman?; ?Times mso-bidi-font-family: mso-hansi-font-family: New? new="New"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体"><br/>------</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">读</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体">[</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">咏荆轲</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体">]</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">有感</span></span></font></p><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: Roman?; ?Times mso-bidi-font-family: mso-hansi-font-family: New? new="New"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体">
<p align="center"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">壮士复还知几多?儒生慷慨说荆轲。</span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体">
<p align="center"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">秦庭一刻流热血,易水千年生怒波。</span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体">
<p align="center"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">英烈无心身后事,健毫有意史前歌。</span></p>
<p align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">萧风吹老关山月,天下兴亡转烛过。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break"/><br style="mso-special-character: line-break"/></span></span></font></p>
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沙发
发表于 2009-11-5 18:05:57 | 只看该作者
<span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" New? mso-hansi-font-family: mso-bidi-font-family: ?Times Roman?; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA? new=\"New\">萧风吹老关山月</span>  真堪为千年一叹也!问好新朋友!
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板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-6 09:14:52 | 只看该作者
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>湘弦绝响</i>在2009-11-05 17:43:10的发言:</b><br/>
<p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" new=\"New\" New? mso-hansi-font-family: mso-bidi-font-family: ?Times Roman?; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA?>英烈无心身后事,健毫有意史前歌。</span></p>
<p><font size=\"4\">这句看起来很工对,其实论意对句就显得为对而对;法乎上就得先从意考虑,流畅在先。</font></p></div>真知灼见!
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-6 09:15:21 | 只看该作者

【南吕.一枝花】 毛泽东

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>锄月花樵</i>在2009-11-05 18:05:57的发言:</b><br/><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" new=\"New\" New? mso-hansi-font-family: mso-bidi-font-family: ?Times Roman?; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA?>萧风吹老关山月</span>  真堪为千年一叹也!问好新朋友! </div>
<p>谢谢!</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-6 09:16:52 | 只看该作者

【商调.集贤宾】周恩来

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>顽石</i>在2009-11-05 20:04:42的发言:</b><br/>欣赏!感觉尾句弱,收不起全篇。拙见! </div>
<p>谢谢朋友关注!关于最后一句,褒贬不一,权且留作争议!</p>
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