苏幕遮 只为故人瘦

消遥庄

<p align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><strong>斜阳道，落叶厚</strong></span><wbr><wbr> </p>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">漫步黄昏，漫步黄昏透</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">碧水青山踏遍后</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">谁牵皓腕，</span><wbr></span><wbr><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">谁牵皓腕袖</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">丹枫叶，南国豆</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">相思血染，相思血染就</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">幽人衣宽风中皱</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">只为故人，只为故人瘦</span><wbr></span><wbr></div><!--v:3.2-->

[此贴子已经被作者于2009-07-24 09:05:11编辑过]

逍遥庄

<p>谢秦版主指点。</p>

秦楼公子

<p>词不错，唯格律差些。</p>

逍遥庄

<p>秋雨君佳节可有新作？</p>

朗州秋雨

逍遥这首很有韵味。欣赏。