再写重阳

观风禅

  
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">忆秋只到家山句，开径渐疑湖海心。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">浅淡花光凭雨去，孤清气类背窗吟。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">酒逢栏外茱萸醉，不觉寒云照座深。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

隔水伊人

<p>浅淡花光凭雨去，孤清气类背窗吟。</p>
<p>酒逢栏外茱萸醉，不觉寒云照座深。</p>
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<p>品?好律!?候???.</p>

观风禅

问好二位！

白雪仙子

这首确好，赏学！

顽石

好律！学习！