天仙子两个

江南兰

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<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">荷塘夜思</span></strong><span lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; TEXT-ALIGN: justify" center? TEXT-ALIGN: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体"><wbr on="on">月色渐柔风渐瘦，一塘荷影香轻透。蛙声唤起忆重重。曾记否，并蒂秀，短棹歌飞微雨后。</span></strong> <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><strong><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span></span></strong></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><strong><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">  </span></span></strong><strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">夜雨敲窗</span></strong><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; TEXT-ALIGN: justify"><strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">杯盏横斜灯黯处，指尖烟绕千端绪。三更夜雨又敲窗，寒若许，恨难驭，一任瘦毫涂乱句。</span></strong> <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

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隔水伊人

<p>月色渐柔风渐瘦，一塘荷影香轻透。蛙声唤起忆重重。曾记否，并蒂秀，短棹歌飞微雨后。</p>
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