[原创]七绝。闺思、闺怨

幽爱随风

<p align="center"><font color="#ff0099" size="6"><strong>七绝。闺思</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#0066ff" size="6"><strong>窗前双燕戏春光，</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#0066ff" size="6"><strong>缱绻多情惹我伤。</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#0066ff" size="6"><strong>奈可闺中心寂寂，</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#0066ff" size="6"><strong>不知何日为谁妆。</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#ff0099" size="6"><strong>七绝。闺怨</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#0066ff" size="6"><strong>一夜相思忆北疆，</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#0066ff" size="6"><strong>千针万线绣衣忙。</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#0066ff" size="6"><strong>离愁别恨知多少，</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#0066ff" size="6"><strong>尽附针中送我郎。</strong></font></p>

司马长风

<p><font color=\"#993366\" size=\"4\">又，此两诗摹古气息稍浓，宜写出时代感。</font></p>

司马长风

<p><font color=\"#993366\" size=\"4\"><strong>    “奈可”费解，疑是“奈何”之误。然“何”为平声，应仄，用“怎奈”即可。</strong></font></p>
<p><font color=\"#993366\" size=\"4\"><strong>    “不知何日为谁妆”一句两问，令人迷惑，应有明指，可改为“为郎妆”。</strong></font></p>
<p><font color=\"#993366\" size=\"4\"><strong>    “一夜”份量嫌不足，可改为“夜夜”。“附”字亦同，宜用“付”。</strong></font></p>
<p><strong><font color=\"#993366\" size=\"4\">    供参考。</font></strong></p>

又是秋色

<p>“奈可”何讲？</p>