临屏成联几则

玉笥山翁

<p><font size="4">蔡文姬 </font></p>
<p><font size="4">一梦入胡笳，故土难归增别恨；</font></p>
<p><font size="4">五言成悲愤，慈亲未仰乱春心。</font></p>
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<p><font size="4">李师师</font></p>
<p><font size="4">不是真情，能留得周郎雅驻？</font></p>
<p><font size="4">几番虚梦，却空增宋室凋微。</font></p>
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<p><font size="4">柳如是</font></p>
<p><font size="4">荷池不纳春心，绳缳却使花颜尽；</font></p>
<p><font size="4">云苑徒增别恨，雅士何知国梦长。</font></p>
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<p><font size="4">秦淮八艳</font></p>
<p><font size="4">态各有妍，桃叶渡头春滟潋；</font></p>
<p><font size="4">情源自雅，荷花池岸月呜咽。</font></p>
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<p><font size="4">陈圆圆 </font></p>
<p><font size="4">史自有真言，未必春颜能误国；</font></p>
<p><font size="4">妾能消美色? 但求好汉莫痴心。</font></p>
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<p><font size="4">花蕊夫人</font></p>
<p><font size="4">才或逊易安，诗耻男儿解甲；</font></p>
<p><font size="4">容不输洪度，梦空帝子降旗。</font></p>
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<p><font size="4">苏小小 </font></p>
<p><font size="4">青眼看梅花，傲骨不输阮郁；</font></p>
<p><font size="4">素心怜雅俊，风姿长憾鲍仁。</font></p>
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<p>本联题均为长青藤墨香居群主“七月风骨（网名）”临屏所拟<br/></p>
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四海一棋

<p>一组联作不错！“慈亲未仰乱春心”这后三字不妥，望再磨。“却空增宋室凋微”后四字亦须斟酌。</p>
<p><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 20px\"><font color=\"#9900cc\"><strong><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" roman?? new=\"new\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>陈圆圆</span> </strong></font></font></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" roman?? new=\"new\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 20px\" color=\"#9900cc\"><strong>史自有真言，未必春颜能误国；</strong></font></span></p>
<p><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 20px\"><font color=\"#9900cc\"><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 20px\"><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 20px\"><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 20px\"><strong><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" roman?? new=\"new\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>妾能消美色</span><span lang=\"EN-US\" XMLANG=\"EN-US\">?</span> <span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" roman?? new=\"new\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>但求好汉莫痴心。</span></strong></font></font></font></font></font></p>
<p><span lang=\"EN-US\" XMLANG=\"EN-US\"><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 20px\" color=\"#9900cc\"><strong> <wbr></strong></font></span></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" roman?? new=\"new\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 20px\" color=\"#9900cc\"><strong>花蕊夫人</strong></font></span></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" roman?? new=\"new\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 20px\" color=\"#9900cc\"><strong>才或逊易安，诗耻男儿解甲；</strong></font></span></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" roman?? new=\"new\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 20px\" color=\"#9900cc\"><strong>容不输洪度，梦空帝子降旗。</strong></font></span></p>此两联可雅赏！

锄月花樵

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