[原创]赋得“饮尽东山一叶秋”（辘轳体）

不忮不求

<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6"><strong>其一</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6"><strong>饮尽东山一叶秋，</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">西楼望月泪空流。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">陈年旧事凭谁说？</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">一缕相思两地愁。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">其二</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">浮云逝水两悠悠，</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">饮尽东山一叶秋。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">闻道乡中橘已绿，</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">归期欲拟泛轻舟。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">其三</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">万里蝇营何日休？</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">浮生或恐老沧州。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">飘蓬满地随风转，</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">饮尽东山一叶秋。</font></strong></p>
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[此贴子已经被作者于2010-9-21 10:20:40编辑过]

荣西安

<p>叶 ，不能饮 ，因此此句在修辞上有误 。个见。</p>
<p>问好诗友，握手！</p>