[原创醉蓬莱?凇花雪月

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用词清婉，欣赏好词！

一阳居士

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>隔水伊人</i>在2010-12-15 14:12:08的发言：</b><br/>
<p>都是四字句呢,好??排哦.品???了!?候一?!</p></div>
<p>下雪了，也出现了雾凇奇观，填一首与大家共赏！</p>

萧萧易水寒

<p>一阳版主好词，寓情于景，情景交融！</p>
<p>附一首旧作以助兴：</p>
<p style=\"MARGIN-LEFT: 18pt\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt\"><font face=\"宋体\">醉蓬莱<span lang=\"EN-US\">*</span>塞下曲（新韵）<span lang=\"EN-US\"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = \"urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice\" /><o:p></o:p></span></font></span></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan\" class=\"MsoNormal\" align=\"left\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\">又登台望远，仟莽苍茫，</span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\">怅然无计</span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\">。</span><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt\" lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan\" class=\"MsoNormal\" align=\"left\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\">遥忆江南？泪涔涔无语。</span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\" lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan\" class=\"MsoNormal\" align=\"left\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\">月桂香微，傲枫红浅，满目阑珊意。<span lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan\" class=\"MsoNormal\" align=\"left\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\">血色残阳，孑行雁远，感怀</span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\">凄许</span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\">。</span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\" lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan\" class=\"MsoNormal\" align=\"left\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\" lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan\" class=\"MsoNormal\" align=\"left\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\">漫道雄关，怒云席雪，铁盾苍苍，甲衣寒气。</span><font face=\"Times New=\"New\"  Roman\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt\" lang=\"EN-US\">  </span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\" lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan\" class=\"MsoNormal\" align=\"left\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\">浊泪何寻，看战袍陈迹。</span><font face=\"Times New=\"New\"  Roman\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt\" lang=\"EN-US\">  </span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\" lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan\" class=\"MsoNormal\" align=\"left\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\">月倚辕门，剑卧虎帐，醉</span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\">望家千里</span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\">。</span><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt\" lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan\" class=\"MsoNormal\" align=\"left\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\">朔角悠悠，催人肠断，几时归去？</span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\" lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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心中有人

好。学习。

卢五

<p>欣赏好词,文至结拍,完成大半工程,过片无力.个见</p>

曲径通幽

真好，我是来学习的。问好！

一阳居士

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>曲径通幽</i>在2010-12-23 19:29:39的发言：</b><br/>真好，我是来学习的。问好！ </div>
<p>谢谢点评，还望多提宝贵意见！</p>

紫嫣郡主

碧水缠绵，霓虹羞涩，探鳞波星跳。沉醉江滨，凇枝如璨，玉容花貌。<img src=\"images/post/smile/dvbbs/em23.gif\" />?好兄！