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一叶孤舟

<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><font color="#ff0000"><strong>咏菊</strong></font></span></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><font color="#ff0000"><strong>只怨秋风吹泪眼，不堪混世染红尘。</strong></font></span></span></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><font color="#ff0000"><strong>娇颜损却凭风雨，恨泻香楼尽醉人。</strong></font></span></span></div>

[此贴子已经被作者于2009-07-20 13:58:30编辑过]

龙青

欲表达的诗意尚好，句子尚需精炼。浅见！

一叶孤舟

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>龙青</i>在2009-07-20 17:27:32的发言：</b><br/>欲表达的诗意尚好，句子尚需精炼。浅见！ </div>
<p>谢谢指点,考虑后,作适当修改:</p>
<p>
<table cellspacing=\"0\" cellpadding=\"0\">
<tbody>
<tr>
<td>
<div id=\"textstyle_1\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 9pt; OVERFLOW: hidden; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 24px; WORD-WRAP: break-word\">
<div style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: \'楷体_gb2312\'\"><font color=\"#ff0000\"><strong>咏菊</strong></font></span></div>
<div style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: \'楷体_gb2312\'\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: \'楷体_gb2312\'\"><font color=\"#ff0000\"><strong>只怨秋风吹泪眼，不堪浊世染红尘。</strong></font></span></span></div>
<div style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: \'楷体_gb2312\'\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: \'楷体_gb2312\'\"><font color=\"#ff0000\"><strong>娇颜尽悴临风雨，恨寄香楼醉梦人。</strong></font></span></span></div></div></td></tr></tbody></table></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2009-07-21 09:32:16编辑过]

龙青

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>一叶孤舟</i>在2009-07-21 09:30:47的发言：</b><br/>
<p>谢谢指点,考虑后,作适当修改:</p>
<p>
<table cellspacing=\"0\" cellpadding=\"0\">
<tbody>
<tr>
<td>
<div id=\"textstyle_1\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 9pt; OVERFLOW: hidden; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 24px; WORD-WRAP: break-word\">
<div style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: \'楷体_gb2312\'\"><font color=\"#ff0000\"><strong>咏菊</strong></font></span></div>
<div style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: \'楷体_gb2312\'\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: \'楷体_gb2312\'\"><font color=\"#ff0000\"><strong>只怨秋风吹泪眼，不堪浊世染红尘。</strong></font></span></span></div>
<div style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: \'楷体_gb2312\'\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: \'楷体_gb2312\'\"><font color=\"#ff0000\"><strong>娇颜尽悴临风雨，恨寄香楼醉梦人。</strong></font></span></span></div></div></td></tr></tbody></table></p>
<div align=\"right\"><font color=\"#000066\">[此贴子已经被作者于2009-07-21 09:32:16编辑过]</font></div></div>
<p>感觉好多了！遥握！</p>

一叶孤舟

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>龙青</i>在2009-07-21 11:55:43的发言：</b><br/>
<p>感觉好多了！遥握！</p></div>
<p>谢谢雅评,遥握！</p>

一叶孤舟

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>好时光</i>在2009-07-21 12:16:17的发言：</b><br/>
<p>不堪浊世染红尘</p>
<p> </p>
<p>道出人情！</p></div>
<p>谢谢好时光朋友,只有交流,才有进步!</p>

天下纵横

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>龙青</i>在2009-07-21 11:55:43的发言：</b><br/>
<p>感觉好多了！遥握！</p></div>
<p>好诗</p>