咏秋海棠

观风禅

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观风禅

首版说的在理，应把题目改为咏白海棠！

司马长风

<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">此亦步红楼原韵也。属对工稳，用词考究。秋海棠虽有多种，然以红色为多见，此专咏白海棠，题似应改。</font>