[原创]七律?梦渡寒江

柳下雪

<p><strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">梦渡寒江雾锁天，</font></strong><strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">悲怜秋水望难穿。</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">梧桐夜雨篷含泪，</font></strong><strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">杨柳晨风岸作舷。</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">借浪诗兴赤壁赋，</font></strong><strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">抹云墨入锦书篇。</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">愁情待引凌霄去，</font></strong><strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">但看千舟挂远帆。</font></strong></p>

[此贴子已经被司马长风于2010-11-30 21:34:19编辑过]

又是秋色

起结尤好！

司马长风

<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">附议秋版。</font>

笃志堂主

<strong><font color=\"#000080\" size=\"5\" face=\"楷体_gb2312\">借浪诗兴赤壁赋，</font></strong><strong><font color=\"#000080\" size=\"5\" face=\"楷体_gb2312\">抹云墨入锦书篇。感觉需要打磨。</font></strong>