七绝?秋江夕阳

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贾连凯

谢长风好友鼓励！

司马长风

<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">一页春帆梦里回<br/>欣赏</font><br/>

贾连凯

诚谢如琴好友指教，“银浪”改为“岁月”如何？

如琴可听

“江流”后面“银浪去”，个人感觉重复，换一个表达方式可能更好！