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[原创]七律 己丑夏日?感八章

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<p><font size="3">之一                                           <font color="#ff0000">简体字对照本(司马辑)</font></font></p>
<p><font size="3">嫩寒???秋天,</font><font size="3">故?江山六十年。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">嫩寒风缓麦秋天,故国江山六十年。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">??清宵慵化蝶,</font><font size="3">日熙卓午倦??。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">梦软清宵慵化蝶,日熙卓午倦听蝉。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">何?妙手??局,</font><font size="3">?得空音?指弦。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">何来妙手开?局,难得空音办指弦。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">想望霓虹???,</font><font size="3">明泉如?玉如?。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">想望霓虹缥缈处,明泉如泻玉如烟。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3"></font> </p>
<p><font size="3">之二 </font></p>
<p><font size="3">碧水泱泱?古?,</font><font size="3">小姑居???埃。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">碧水泱泱?古台,小姑居处绝尘埃。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">?光呼吸?眉?,</font><font size="3">爽?氤?洞府?。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">岚光呼吸须眉绿,爽气氤氲洞府开。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">?越?????,</font><font size="3">但教青?到蓬?。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">难越红墙连广汉,但教青鸟到蓬莱。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">何如六合三千外,</font><font size="3">返照?山??雷。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">何如六合三千外,返照灵山听蛰雷。</span> </font></p>
<p><font size="3"></font> </p>
<p><font size="3">之三 </font></p>
<p><font size="3">千仞高?欲卜?,</font><font size="3">百年悲笑入??。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">千仞高岗欲卜庐,百年悲笑入虚无。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">?人?雨停??,</font><font size="3">?古江山?墨?。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">怀人风雨停云赋,吊古江山泼墨图。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">?勃?泉流玉髓,</font><font size="3">清?意?在冰?。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">郁勃涧泉流玉髓,清凉意绪在冰壶。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">??生怕??怒,</font><font size="3">此夕??不敢呼。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">观澜生怕鱼龙怒,此夕临渊不敢呼。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3"></font> </p>
<p><font size="3">之四 </font></p>
<p><font size="3">年逾耳?此身?,</font><font size="3">海水天?自往?。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">年逾耳顺此身闲,海水天风自往还。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">??沉???浦,</font><font size="3">???雨系空山。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">缥缈沉云归远浦,纷纭挂雨系空山。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">??坐忘三心外,</font><font size="3">?相倘佯五??。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">凭虚坐忘三心外,离相倘佯五蕴间。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">似??霞西日下,</font><font size="3">疏??杵到??。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">似绮残霞西日下,疏钟几杵到禅关。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3"></font> </p>
<p><font size="3">之五 </font></p>
<p><font size="3">夏?流宕有?中,</font><font size="3">?去?茅海??。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">夏云流宕有无中,归去诛茅海峤东。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">孤榻近窗?夜月,</font><font size="3">素琴?壁拂天?。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">孤榻近窗亲夜月,素琴挂壁拂天风。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">一?冷?琅?碧,</font><font size="3">十里温馨菡萏?。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">一帘冷韵琅?碧,十里温馨菡萏红。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">??振衣舒?臆,</font><font size="3">凌???入??。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">??振衣舒?臆,凌虚长啸入鸿蒙。</span> </font></p>
<p><font size="3"></font> </p>
<p><font size="3">之六 </font></p>
<p><font size="3">藏舟幽壑意何如?</font><font size="3">芥子???子?。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">藏舟幽壑意何如?芥子须弥话子虚。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">蕉下莫名??鹿,</font><font size="3">濠?焉辨我非?。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">蕉下莫名谁梦鹿,濠间焉辨我非鱼。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">??垂?清江艇,</font><font size="3">?缶微吟陋室居。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">横矶垂钓清江艇,击缶微吟陋室居。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">自?天心?沌甚,</font><font size="3">奇肱妙想???。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">自许天心浑沌甚,奇肱妙想驭飞车。</span> </font></p>
<p><font size="3"></font> </p>
<p><font size="3">之七</font><font size="3"> </font></p>
<p><font size="3">??一枕黑甜眠,</font><font size="3">最喜??小暑天。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">萧闲一枕黑甜眠,最喜轻阴小暑天。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">玉?冰?三酌酒,</font><font size="3">瓜浮井渫?文?。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">玉贮冰壶三酌酒,瓜浮井渫几文钱。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">清?北斗???,</font><font size="3">??南熏奏?筵。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">清辉北斗回银汉,广乐南熏奏锦筵。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">倘若?雷?海上,</font><font size="3">蕉??雨碧??。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">倘若风雷来海上,蕉轩观雨碧无边。</span> </font></p>
<p><font size="3"></font> </p>
<p><font size="3">之八 </font></p>
<p><font size="3">北?抱膝??然,</font><font size="3">??永?寂不言。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">北轩抱膝兴?然,闻蝉永昼寂不言。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">花?荼蘼春信老,</font><font size="3">?回?塞午??。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">花过荼蘼春信老,梦回鸡塞午钟传。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">清?几榻明?垢。</font><font size="3">勃?林泉??川。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">清凉几榻明无垢,勃郁林泉绿满川。</span></font></p>
<p><font size="3">最喜???雨夕,</font><font size="3">???指玉潺?。    <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">最喜萧条风雨夕,锦筝弹指玉潺?。</span></font></p>
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沙发
发表于 2009-11-20 19:01:42 | 只看该作者
乍读十二,又赏八章,更见妙处。此组遣词谋篇,深得法度,比兴互见,情境相协,涉猎甚广,寓意亦深,得诗之真趣而足显诗外之功也。拟当推精!
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发表于 2009-11-20 19:10:06 | 只看该作者
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>锄月花樵</i>在2009-11-20 19:01:42的发言:</b><br/>乍读十二,又赏八章,更见妙处。此组遣词谋篇,深得法度,比兴互见,情境相协,涉猎甚广,寓意亦深,得诗之真趣而足显诗外之功也。拟当推精! </div>
<p>附议锄月首版,亦推!另繁体字影响阅读,问好!</p>
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发表于 2009-11-20 21:54:23 | 只看该作者
<p>支持推精,问好吟兄!</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-21 14:11:47 | 只看该作者
?打?撞,?算把?篇?文搞到段落分明!但下次又不知如何才能搞掂?老朽愚拙!
???上?位????勉?,初到?地,老朽拜望?位高明!
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-22 06:42:50 | 只看该作者
??湘弦???注指教!
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<p>问好,欣赏!</p>
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发表于 2009-11-23 22:33:39 | 只看该作者

至爱的老父亲,上辈子我是你的情人

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>锄月花樵</i>在2009-11-20 19:01:42的发言:</b><br/>乍读十二,又赏八章,更见妙处。此组遣词谋篇,深得法度,比兴互见,情境相协,涉猎甚广,寓意亦深,得诗之真趣而足显诗外之功也。拟当推精! </div>
<p>支持推精!</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-24 23:29:07 | 只看该作者
???位??雅?!
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欣赏精品。
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